The squarer eyes and the TV by Archie

//The squarer eyes and the TV by Archie

There was a girl called Iona. She had two brothers called Archie and Hamish. One day she was watching TV and she fell a sleep. Whilst she was asleep, she saw two plants talking, a tree moving and a witch.

“Hi!” said Iona.

“Are you Nona? Don’t hurt me with water!” said the witch.

“I’m not Nona. I’m Iona,” said Iona scared.

Chapter 2 the evil witches.

Iona was running in lands she hadn’t been before.

“Wait!” shouted the witch.

Chapter 3 youtubers.

Iona went on and came to a land called Oz, minecraft.

“Hello and welcome back to one of my videos!” said Stampy.

“No my video!” shouted l for lee.

Let’s get on then,” said Dominic12234 Gaming.

“No I want stand here on this block!” shouted the french man.

“Yes me too!” said minecraftguy768.

“Go now!” said weeee weeee gaming.

“Hi” said Iona.

Hmm you can not be in our video said the you tubers.

How should the story end?

By |2017-05-19T09:38:23+00:00April 23rd, 2015|Pupil Blog|4 Comments

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  1. Dominic April 23, 2015 at 1:51 pm - Reply


  2. Harrison April 23, 2015 at 1:55 pm - Reply

    good job archie :D

  3. lara April 28, 2015 at 1:35 pm - Reply

    it should end by iona becoming a minecraft person and gets into a secret place and turning the world into minecraft ;)

  4. Harrison April 30, 2015 at 1:30 pm - Reply

    hi i think it shoud end by them fighting


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