Merryn’s 100 word story

//Merryn’s 100 word story

It was the queen’s 50th and she was taking a ride in the royal carriage with her husband Prince Phillip. Little did she know her toaster would be planning to take over the world by toasting all the bread. The toaster shuffled across the counter-top. It got to the end. It plonked down. It tripped up the maid who was holding the royal milk.

It spilt all over the floor and slid towards the front door. Luckily it’d rained the day before; the toaster slid over the water onto the road and soon after got crushed by the queen’s carriage.

 

By | 2015-03-03T13:55:06+00:00 March 3rd, 2015|Pupil Blog|8 Comments

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  1. millie March 3, 2015 at 1:57 pm - Reply

    this is an amazing story it really makes me laugh

  2. Nyah March 3, 2015 at 1:58 pm - Reply

    I LOVE YOUR 100 WORD STORY LARA

    NYAH

  3. sam brown March 5, 2015 at 7:29 pm - Reply

    fantastic Merryn, you crazy girl!!

  4. bethan March 5, 2015 at 8:09 pm - Reply

    Haha great ending good job well done Merryn :)

  5. MISS COOK March 17, 2015 at 11:31 am - Reply

    A great story in 100 words! I liked your use of short sentences for comedy effect too!

  6. abi March 17, 2015 at 1:34 pm - Reply

    fabulous story. LOVES IT

  7. nina March 17, 2015 at 1:40 pm - Reply

    fab story merryn. it makes me laugh a little

  8. blake March 17, 2015 at 1:48 pm - Reply

    great story ;)

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